Hi Sylvia,
Where to begin? Was it the background barking, serious camera shake, or glaring back lighting that was most headache-making? And was that a pile of dirty laundry in the corner?
About instructor presence, what came across to me was boring... lots of detail in a monotone voice, even when talking about passionate interests! The video is only 1:27 minutes but seems much longer!!!
Great idea to give this what not to do example. No one wants to be that person!
Cheers, Donna