Wonderful that you made it though the full cycle and published a revised rubric based on feedback!
It strikes me that this rubric is important for your groups of learners, Leonne. It's not apparent to those who are new to college/university life or are upgrading to enter higher ed that learning habits and skills go far beyond getting through the work. This rubric lays out many factors that even I neglect, and I should know better (physical!!)
Anyway, I don't have further suggestions but want to say brava! Next step is to try it out with your learners and see how it goes!